A Traveled Road (Shakes)
I've tried this a bit differently than my usual...trying to connect it more and make it flow a little better. Don't know if it worked. Don't know if I like it. Read it more like paragraphs than by 14...
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Great poem Bill. Just a suggestion when you post an English sonnet you do it as a 14 liner and that applies to any of the normal forms.
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Teagan De Danaan wrote: Great poem Bill. Just a suggestion when you post an English sonnet you do it as a 14 liner and that applies to any of the normal forms. Thanks for reading and your...
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No inspite of the construction of the first sonnets 8 - 6 it was decided to present them as 14 lines, this tradition was carried on in France and Spain and when it came to England that 14 lines...
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But Terry...I must be misunderstanding because this sonnet has 14 lines of ten syllables each. Is this not as Shakespeare designed? I'm confused... OOPS! A light bulb just went on in my brain. I think...
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I read this carefully Bill and can't see anything wrong but right or wrong I love the content and the message which I agree with.
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cusick wrote: I read this carefully Bill and can't see anything wrong but right or wrong I love the content and the message which I agree with. Hi Mags...Thanks my dear friend. I'm just trying to get...
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Forgive me both I was not criticising I was trying to point out that although your poem was exceptionaly good in view of what I have learned recently, traditional sonnets should be posted as 14 lines...
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You go Bill! I love this very much, sweet, a smooth ride as it travels on down the page with thoughts of a couple hand-in-hand and in love
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Tell the truth Bill, I read poems as entire entities, not to be broken down into bits regardless of the form being used, or even if it is a free write. You know I write often with forms though I tend...
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